Tan Renga: feeling alone

Today’s tanka comes from the Carpe Diem Haiku challenge #81. The haiku was written by Yozakura and the last two stanzas, to complete the tanka, were written by me. See the challenge post for more information. 

feeing alone
lost in the woods around Edo –
just the autumn wind
© Yozakura

the chill cuts across my flesh
to my destiny I press
© Greg Wolford 

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