The old home place was long gone now. Still, I liked to visit where it once stood when I was in the area. Grandma’s roses once led down the gravel walkway, a lush green hedge from spring through fall, bursting with pink petals intermittently as they bloomed. Overgrown now, the roses strangled by weeds and vines, the pathway would be indistinguishable to anyone not knowing to look for it. The sweet smelling roses are now only a memory, like Granny and Papaw. The honeysuckle that has overtaken the beloved flowers require no loving care. Yet the emitt an enchanting – but entirely different – fragrance; I’m not sure I like it.
Honeysuckle vine
Covered in fragrant white blooms
Thicket of perfume
This is my attempt at composing a kikôbun/haibun, linked to the Time Glass challenge perfume at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai.
The last line of the prose was masterful, understated, but summing up sowell – very nicely done, with good imagery in haiku
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Thank you :0)
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Beautifully written Greg … a nice kikobun/haibun with a gorgeous haiku to conclude it.
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Thank you for the kind words Chèvrefeuille
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