Its been a very long, tiring day for me so far – and it is still early! I was heading off for an afternoon nap when I saw the weekly TRC posted to the CDHK website. As you may know, I have a particular fondness for these tan renga; don’t ask why: I just do.
The hokku, as I (finally) learned it’s called, was written near the end of the author’s life and I could feel that. The last two lines, my contribution to make the haiku into a tanka, came to me almost instantly; I only had to tweak a few words and I had it. Make sure to see the original post to learn more about this exercise, the author, and all things Japanese -poetry related really.
this autumn
why getting older is like
a bird into clouds
© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)
gliding along through skies
on the way to where he came
© Greg Wolford
Nicely done, Greg.
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Thank you, Janice
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A nice completion, Greg
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Thank you Jen 🙂
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A wonderful completion Greg and so … spiritual too.
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Beautiful completion:)
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Thank you 🙂
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