Freshly Drawn: a tanka/tan renga

The first three lines are written by Chiyo-Ni, a famous haiku poetess; the last two lines, completing the tanka, are written by me. I love this style of writing, combing two authors’ thoughts to create one piece of, dare I say, art!

morning glory!
the well bucket-entangled,
I ask for water

© Chiyo-Ni

Graciously given by host
Freshly drawn cooling my skin

© Greg Wolford 

Linked to CDHK weekly tan renga challenge

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