Day 4 of OctPoWriMo brings us the idea of magic and mysticism. The prompt words are: Fantastic, Magic, Mystical. I decided to try out a new poetry form, new for me at least: the Shadorma. I have see. It used a lot recently and having a form that is very similar to haiku and tanka, both of which I enjoy, I thought I’d give it a go.
The ideas that came to me thinking on these words were the new possibilities of each new day.
new day dawns
sun shining brightly
mystical
magical
bringing a fresh attitude
all things are made new
Everyday we are given a blank canvas with which to work. How we use it, what we choose to apply to it are our choices alone. Yesterday has forever left us and tomorrow may never come; make something fantastic with today.
“Look here, you who say, “Today or tomorrow we are going to a certain town and will stay there a year. We will do business there and make a profit.” How do you know what your life will be like tomorrow? Your life is like the morning fog—it’s here a little while, then it’s gone.”
Oh I love yours way more than mine, Greg! Great job–Shadormas are addictive! Good verse from James, too!
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Thank you, J. Yes, these new forms are great fun to explore.
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Most welcome.
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I like writing in Shadorma form too. Enjoyed this one.
http://rallentanda.blogspot.com.au/2015/10/bullies.html
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Thank you 🙂
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I hadn’t heard of Shadorm poetry form before. Thanks for doing this one and the link to how to do it. I really enjoyed reading yours!
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Thank you. I’m sure you’ll have fun trying it 🙂
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oops…that was supposed to be Shadorma…;-)
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I had to check twice to make sure I’d spelled it right myself LOL
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Hi, Greg…I hope you don’t mind…I left your link on my blog. I tried the Shadorma poem, and I’d like to thank you for introducing it to me. 🙂
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No, I don’t mind at all. I’m guessing you liked it; I know I found it fun and want to try it more.
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I did enjoy writing the Shadora poem. I’m going to try it again, I’m sure. I’ve always liked doing Haiku, and this one give just a little more to work with in the line count!
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Have you ever tried tanka? It’s 5-7-5-7-7 and gives a little more space, too.
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I’ve tried tanka a time or two, just playing around with it. I should do more of that also!
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