Have you ever done something, been happy with it, fininished it all up, going along your merry way, only to have second thoughts about how you could’ve done it differently for hours? If you’re the creative-type (or OCD a perfectionist) I’m sure you have.
Well, this has been my dilemma all day since posting my piece for today’s OctPoWriMo prompt. And since this idea is driving me (even more) nutty I have given in to it! So, in my mind’s opinion, I share a better (or at least different) thought on the prompt in a chained tanka.
bridge to tomorrow –
beckoning for me to come
there from yesterday
what I see now as that bridge
is actually todaythe past is just that
the future lies out ahead
I stand on today
the bridge we will never cross
because it’s always todaytoday never ends
tomorrow will never come
yesterday ne’er was
the illusion of that bridge
is just our reality
“Yesterday’s the past, tomorrow’s the future, but today is a gift. That’s why it’s called the present.”
– Bill Keane
This is also linked to the BeWoW and Writers Quote Wednesday communities, both of which you should check out!
Oh I love what you did with this, Greg–well worth the “obsessing” (wink!). I’m wondering if you meant “as” in the 4th line: “what I see now IS bridge”? There’s such wisdom in your words–today being the bridge we’ll never cross, as today never ends; it’s all illusion. So well done!
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Thank you, J; it was worth the wrestling match 😉 I’ll look; you’re probably right: autocorrect “helps” me with those words a lot 😦
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I’m an old-school proof-reader; never use auto-correct, as I hear many people say it’s not as helpful as it should be…
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I’m a terrible speller; they invented it for me LOL In college an English professor said something to me about my grumbling about spelling tests. I held up a then state-of-the-art pocket dictionary and said “That’s why I spent $50 on this; I know I’m a terrible speller!” LOL
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Hahahahahahahah–you’re killin’ me!!
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True story
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They’re the best, aren’t they!
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Sure enough; thanks again for the catch 😉
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Most welcome…one day I may be dead-wrong, discover that you intended whatever the thing was I pointed out 🙂
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Keep pointing just in case LOL
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Okay, as an English Major it’s awfully hard for me not to 🙂 But I’m careful which blogs I “monitor” (wink)–some folks aren’t as agreeable/tolerant as you are.
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The guys I used to call me “Job” so I reckon it just flows through me 😉
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It was definitely worth going back to 🙂 Great poem
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Thank you, sir. I’m glad I re-did it; much more pleased with this one! 🙂
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