sun bathed wooden bench
invites old man – sit awhile
rest yourself on me
sunlight warms and soothes your bones
breeze carries worries away
sun bathed wooden bench
invites old man – sit awhile
rest yourself on me
sunlight warms and soothes your bones
breeze carries worries away
both lovely, i am partial to the first tho I just like the way it flows.
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Thank you, Mandy 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you 🙂
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Lovely Haiku
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Thank you 🙂
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Tanka’s are my favorite.
I’ve invited you to participate in a 3 day quote challenge, http://meredithlbl.com/2015/07/03/happy-4th-july-2015/
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Thank you, Meredith; looks like I’ve got some work to get to! 🙂
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Lovely haiku, Greg. 🙂
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Reblogged this on Elusive Trope.
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I LOVE THIS!
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Thank you 🙂
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